Love the reversal at the end! "Simple" like this is an art, not at all easy. thanks for posting it,
I agree with Julie. This is a poem to study alongside Laura Shovan's post this week on rhyme!
Hadn't heard that one. I like it... I like "round and young", to "young and round", with the comparison of baby birds to children's song. Thanks for sharing it.
Oh this is, as Julie said, a wonderful example of how beautiful a "simple" poem can be. And those of us who write know how hard writing simply really is! thank you for sharing.
So timeless, these beautiful poems. :)
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